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[The Interactive Report 2]

Interesting. I learned something today d:

However, there were quite a few grammar/spelling errors throughout. Some that stand out:

"Full-Length" Is misspelled on the slide that mentions full-length, color animated films

"First Ever" Is misspelled on the slide with the toy story picture.

"Gace?" Not even sure what word that should be. On the slide mentioning the Polar Express.

"Convenient" Is Mispelled on the slide after the one mentioning Adobe Flash.

I recommend taking another look at the writing o:

I mean I hate to be a total grammar Nazi, but this is an English project after all. xD

blubfaceproduction responds:

thanks, I mean, I really should have been a litte more careful with the spelling, but Iwas in a rush when I was typing it, since I procrastinated until 2 days before it was due to do this.

[Escaping the Prison]

Got the badass ending d:

Very cool, was fun to watch/play. Good animation, good music, interesting d:

PuffballsUnited responds:

Glad you enjoyed it! :)